Tuesday, February 18, 2014

The Seven Deadly Sins of Suspense Writing



Do you write suspense novels or hope to write one? Then you need to be aware of the Seven Deadly Sins of Suspense Writing. Deadly – because they kill your chances of success.

Here they are. The seven biggest reasons agents and editors and readers could be left cold by your suspense novel.

1.         The terror in your story is not terrifying enough.

2.         That terror, or jeopardy to your protagonist hero or heroine, does not begin immediately, at the story opening – preferably page one, paragraph one.

3.         That terror does not escalate steadily and maddeningly to a bite-your-nails-to-the-bone climax.

4.         That climax is not a truly dramatic clash between good – your hero or heroine – and evil – your villain/antagonist.

5.         That villain/antagonist is not adequately formidable and plausible to make his defeat truly satisfying.

6.         This final confrontation is not drawn out sufficiently to let the reader savor the triumph of your hero.

7.         There is not enough story action and complication to sustain the length – approximately 80,000 to 100,000 words – of the novel.

Does your story avoid every single one of these deadly storytelling sins? Ask yourself this question. Be extremely hard-nosed and objective when you answer. Your future as a suspense novelist depends on it.

I’ll be talking about these seven deadly sins and much much more this coming Saturday February 22nd at my two-hour seminar workshop WRITE THE THRILLER-MYSTERY NOVEL TO DIE FOR: How to Make Your Story a Page Turner.


My presentation is sponsored by New Jersey Sisters in Crime and takes place in Monroe NJ. Contact Daria Ludas at dlludas@verizon.net to find out more. I’d love to see you there.

No comments: